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You were running, running as fast as your four paws could take you. It was pouring down raining, and being a stray you had nowhere to go. Your fur was drenched to the bone and you couldn't help but let a few meows slip out. You wondered aimlessly till you head a meow from somewhere near. Quickly turning your head to were met with two harp red eyes.

"Hey, Stay here for awhile till the rain lets up."the tom said as he scooted over in his box.

You didn't complain, listening to him you sat down next to him. You couldn't help but notice he had a scar on his face and apparently he caught you looking.

"Kesesesesesese! The awesome me's too much for you!"he said grinning like an idiot.

"Thank you..."you said ignoring his comment.

"Gilcat."he said smiling proudly.

You ignored him and curled up beside him.

"Going to sleep."he asked turning his head to the side.

"Hmmm."was all you replied as you slowly fell into slumber.

You heard him sigh and scoot closer to you as he rapped his tail around your freezing body. You didn’t know at the time but you’d be the best of friends.


You remembered the time you first met your best friend. He seemed annoying for awhile, especially when you found out that his little brother was the alpha in his pack, he mooched off of people (including you!), and sometimes he'd try flirting with you and to be honest. I was sad. But it didn't mean you didn't like him just.... as a friend. At least that’s what you kept telling yourself. You'd see him with many other girl cats that defiantly looked more exotic to the plain you.

"[Name]!"came his happy meow's.

Speak of the devil.

"[Name]! [Name]! Hey! Guess what!"he exclaimed happily as he bounced up and down.

"What is it?"you asked.

He looked at you with a sly smile and leaned toward you.

"Come with me."he said as he quickly dashed off.

Sighing you ran after him and ended up in a beautiful garden with big round juicy tomatos.

"Wow!"you said in aw.

"Kesesesese! I knew you'd react like that!"he said laughing at you.

Pouting you trudged forward.

"How do you know of this place?"you asked as you started to nibble at one of the tomato's.

"This is my friend, Spaincat's, owner’s garden. Isn't it cool!?"he yelled.

Nodding you felt his tail brush against yours.

"Eh?"was all you said as you looked up at the Prussian cat and saw a beautiful orange sky behind him that seemed to brighten his eyes up.

You were at a loss of words at the beautiful sight and almost didn't feel his tough rub against your cheek. Quickly snapping out of your daze you looked up at the tom.

"[Name]... I-I've loved you for along time."he said confessing as he looked down at you.

It stayed quiet and you could almost see Gilcat start to fidget.

"I love you to!"you said suddentaly pouncing on him.

You both rolled on the ground and happily till you pinned him down and licked his nose. You saw his face heat up.

"[N-Name]..."you heard him whisper aloud.

Before you knew it his smirk returned and he was now pinning you.

"Gil!"you whimpered sarcastically as you looked up and saw his eyes go spark with something dark.

"[Name] let's go back to my place."he said and in just on sentence, not only did he ruin the moment but never before had you both ran so fast back to his place in your life.

Over the next few days you both were happy together and even managed to make his brother snap at you both for apperintalt 'bugging' him. You were both hanging out like you usually did when you walked out into the street without looking both ways. A car came speeding at you and just as you turned to realize you were about to die, Gil rambled into you and the car missed out completely.

"[NAME]!"you heard the yell of your lover.

As you landed hard on the other side you turned and was going to yell at him when you saw him laying limp in th road. He wasn't squished but he wasn't moving either. Running to his side you carefully pulled him over to the side walk and layed next to him.

"G-Gil...?"you asked hesitantly.

He didn't respond.

"H-Hey! Wake up already! This isn't funny!"you yelled as you felt tears streaming down your face.

You didn't know what to do so you got on his side and started messaging him. You meow loudly trying to get someone’s attention but all they did was ignore you or stare. You started pouncing on him to wake up. Tears leaked out from your eyes as nothing happened. You didn't stop trying to make him move, yell, bat at, ANYTHING! Just to make him move. Reaching over to his face you started licking his face. You continued this till you knew he wouldn't wake up. So you curled up by his side and rested your head next to his. Giving one more lick you let darkness over come your vision and you passed out. You woke up as you were grabbed softly and placed in a cage separate from his.

"N-NO! G-Gil! Please wake up!"you cried as you watched as you were both taken on you a tuck where they took him out and started placing strange things over his mouth, and placing things near his heart.

You were suddenly taken out but with more caution as the pushed Gil aside. They started doing the same thing to you as they did to Gil. You heard one of the strange humans mutter the word incredible.... Your eyes grew wide.

'What? Who?' you thought as the truck stopped and you were both taken away.

You were kept in a nursery and taken care of by the humans and some other friendly cats but you just wanted to be with Gil. A few months passed and you overheard a conversation between some of your caretakers.

"That's her right?"the short on asked.

"Yeah."replyed the blond one.

"Poor girl, losing her mate like that."a women said as she walked by.

'No....It couldn't be.... H-He was just resting and when he got better he-he'd........'

It didn't matter. You couldn't trick yourself any longer. Hearing and knowing the truth hurt to much. You slowly collapsed as you felt your heart shatter in two.

'Please let me see him'you thought desperately as everything faded to black.

Beep. Beep. Beep. Beep. Beep.

Slowly opening your eyes you were met with a bright light and something soft lying next to you. You were going to fall back asleep when you heard a few small meows. Your ears perked up and you turned your head meeting three small baby kittens. They seemed oddly familiar. The oldest looking one had white fur with blue eyes, the smallest had blue eyes with black soft fur, but the other looked like the spitting image of your lost lover Gil...... Then it hit you. They were yours. Your eyes teard up as you pulled them all toward you. You started licking them as you all purred happily. Gil was gone but he left some gifts for you.

You all were adopted by a kind man with blond hair, blue eyes, named Ludwig. He had three dogs that were kind to you and your kittens and a few friends of his own, especially the Italian one. Your little girl was named Julie, the youngest was named Luddy, and the other was named after his father Gilbert. Your kittens finally got old enough to go outside so you walked around till you met two of your lovers old friends. They had brought you all to the secret base where you remet everyone. You were so happy to see them and find out some had kits of their own! When the kits were playing they all asked you what happened to Gil, and you told them. Tears fell from everyone’s eyes. Even Germousr was crying. Years went by and when your kits finally moved out and had mates of their own. For the first time after Gil was gone. You felt lonely. You slowly curled up and closed your eyes.

"[Name]."you heard a old familiar voice.

Snapping your eyes open you looked up and saw Gil.........

"G-Gil!"you cried as you got up and tackled him.

"I've missed you so much!"he said licking you sweetly.

"I have too!"you cried rubbing your head against his chin.

"I've been watching you for along time. I'm so pound at our kits!"he said proudly as he puffed out his chest.

"I want you to come with me."he said.

You smiled and nodded happily to him. He turned his head and started walking as you fallowed behind him. And then you vanished. A few days later everyone went to go check on you and found you laying still curled up as a flower petal fell onto your face.

"She's with him now."Germousr said quietly.

Sorry I had no imagination for the name.
I was board and dicided to make this so sorry if it's short or goes on to fast.
Hope you like!
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cheyrgirl Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014
it's really good made me cry though 😖😭😢😢I'm so sad now but very good job on the storyWaaaah! 
Cheezit1x1 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014  Hobbyist
Aww, there there. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! :iconsupertighthugplz:
LovinaOctaviaVargas Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
;A; my feelz! they hurt! *cries in a corner* (love it so much)
Cheezit1x1 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist
Thank you!! ^_^\\
emilies13th Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Student General Artist
katcraft455 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
GAAAH!! The feels are all broken now...
anastasia5858 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013
so sad i cryed

Cheezit1x1 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist
Aww thank you~!
anastasia5858 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013
no prob! ^.^
KaixShadow Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I CRIED!!!! Ish sad! But i really like it!
Cheezit1x1 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Hobbyist
Aww! Thank you! ^w^
EmiliaSteilsson142 Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
VHAAAAAAAAA Vat a happy ending
"She's with him now"
I cried at zat part
Cheezit1x1 Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Hobbyist
;w; thank you!
EmiliaSteilsson142 Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Jour velcome
puccafan762 Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Student Artist
BlueLight01 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwwwww I love bittersweet endings!!! Cuteness everlasting!!!!!!!!!!
Lexus-J-M Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this was so cute
Cheezit1x1 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist
Thanx! ^^
Cabooselover Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student General Artist
sakunae Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awww... Best kitty love story ever.... (and better than Twilight) *is shot at*

S.: *Grabs me and dodges bullets* You just had to go there.

Yup! BD!
BlackAngelLight Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
I teared up the first time I read this but this time Brantley Gilbert's - Saving Amy started playing in my i-Tunes. OMG it fits so well its creepy! And now im crying! TT^TT
Cheezit1x1 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist
XD Aww!
Shayukihunosaki Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012
Omg I cried!
Cheezit1x1 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist
Thank you! TwT I was hoping!
Shayukihunosaki Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012
PyonPyonUsagi-chan Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
FakeK Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
YOU! What have you done?! Q~Q Manry tears have been shed and I'm not even a man!

This was so cute and fluffy and adorable and ywergfjvhdcvbnkjasdherjgvfwsd Q~Q.
Cheezit1x1 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist
/TwT/ Thank you!! I'm so happy you love it!
Enbi-to-Miruku Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Student General Artist
Aww, the ending is so adorable although it's been really sad
Mimiiz Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012
:iconcryforeverplz: WHY?
Cheezit1x1 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist
gothicemokid1 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
its adorable.... and really really sad...
wildone2015 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
awwwww you just put me on a freakin' emotional rollercoaster :iconcryforeverplz:
FullMetal-Edward2012 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
nooooooooooo!!! The awesome gilbert has died!!! but then i died so its ok ^^
TheMysteriousPoet Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
OMG THE WORLD IS TRYING TO MAKE ME FEEL GUILTY! WORLD, WHY WORLD WHY!!! I did a neko Rp with my friend and then I got mad at her and we started to fight and now i feel bad! and it was a Prussia one and my OC! im going to apoligize...

this was so cute and kawaii!! I thought of a title! Raindrop Lovers OR Running in the Rain..
Cheezit1x1 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist
Aww! Thanx! ^^/
AndromSerket Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
(Keheehee~! And the little girl kit has my name!!)
Cheezit1x1 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist
Thanx! XD
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